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AN: HI! This is my first story, here on the Writing Desk, so please review! HEATH’S POV….. I smiled as we stepped out into the sunshine, finally, and put on my sandy white cowboy hat. I gently took...
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I read this over in Fan Fiction and I think I left a comment but if not good job. Glad you decided to post over here in the WD. I know your working on a story for SMDM so hope to read that when you...
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Nice job for a first story here. Very intense and you got the whole family involved. Enjoyed it!
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Very nice, If there were any misstakes I don;t think I saw them as I read to see what was going on. Hope you grace us with another story When you can. Thank you.
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Ambitious multi-pov for first effort. Cool. Thanks for sharing. btw, I like your title.
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Valley Cyn AnnVery nice, If there were any misstakes I don;t think I saw them as I read to see what was going on. Hope you grace us with another story When you can. Thank you. Thanks everybody! I...
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Thank you for posting this. I really enjoyed it! I love how you gave the prospective of each member of the family and even Silas! Very well done! Can't wait to read more of your stories!
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Well done for having a go and with all the POV's that was an extra difficult story. Now you've started hope to see some more. Remember, even bad reviews are better than just being ignored, proving...
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Writing from different characters' POV is always a challenge. Nicely done!Debbie
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You've written this very well. All your pov-s are believable of the character.
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